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2020-10-31 22:59

Reading through Google translation. Look I very much like you work, men. I like you choice of females in a group and how you portrait them. I was liking how the story go. I even could praise for how good you could bs and make story longer. (I mean, whole guilty crown world isn't actually that big, but you make the most of it). But come on, man. Stop drugging arc and character relationship with bs logic. You deliberately nerf mc, so that you could give much more drama and write longer chapters. Than come useless shames in the end arc, for epic countdown of guilty crown world... Was this really necessary? Logically speaking -no. But as a writer who need to cram more chapters - of course, very important mind games of mc, is exactly what readers wanted, eh. I still like this work and that is good work for sure, but **** you. Like really **** you.

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