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It's just an overview with minor things changed. It's not even that good to be honest, cause most of the time if not all the time theirs a spelling error. Not even because the letter is to close to each other, like for and far. Stupid spelling mistakes that could've been fixed if he reread what he was writing. They were very common mind you, because of that sometimes entire paragraphs didn't make sense, so as the reader you have to reread it, sometimes numerous times because that one word could mean anything. Next time you try to write a story proofread after you finish the chapter or every other paragraph.

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Reborn as Mo Fan from Versatile Mage

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