Review Detail of LinYang in ___///

The whole vibe of this story reminds me of one of Agatha Christie's novels, or perhaps a Sherlock Holmes story. The author has a good, solid grasp on language and a wide vocabulary, and there were minimal grammatical mistakes for the first part, which can be fixed easily with some editing. The author creates a strong, distinct character voice, as well as suspense and engagement throughout. One of the best works on WN that I have seen so far. Keep up the good work!