Review Detail of Lightazen in Read This Master Piece ---》

As expected of a xianxia/wuxia setting. The irrationality of it all surprises me even to this day. The grammar is bad, you need to fix many typos. The previous life of the MC is funny if you don't think much of it, but it is actually ridiculous. Sound proofing your room? Seriously? If it's noisy just give him some headphones. Also, a stray bullet hitting him and dying from blood loss? Fuking hell! Just crawl your way out of your room and scream! Wtf is wrong with this MC! The dumbness is irritating. The arrogant young master appeared too quick. It's only the first chapter yet you're gonna bring out the fodders? No world building? No characterization? The fangirls are also annoying, like wtf? MC is strong just because he's handsome? Bitch pls. Same with the fanboys of the arrogant young masters, fking hell, they're one of the reasons why I hate xianxia/wuxia novels so much. Just showing that you're handsome is enough to gain badass points? I'm sorry but this is not badass enough to gain points. Defeating weak fodders are also not enough reason to gain badass points. Why? Because imagine, An ***** beating a dog or a **** for that matter, is that badass? No it is not. First chapter already shows that MC is already OP so instead of defeating weaklings, go defeat some real strong foes. Oh but wait, this story uses a xianxia/wuxia setting so this story doesn't have a real strong enemy, they only have weak fodders and only shows the strength of the MC by continuously annihilating weaklings. I'm sorry if I'm too harsh in my review but this is what I think of the story. You may be discouraged by this, but please, please try to improve so that no more harsh bastards like me will criticize your story.