Review Detail of BoneDaddySuccubi in Read This Master Piece ---》

₥Ø₥₥Ɏ ₳₥₳₮ɆⱤ₳₴Ʉ from discord is here to review your novel because of a punishment I received from the young master and creator of The Badass Itachi Uchiha in Fairy Tail. Jason was feeling bad about a rating of mine and a fellow bitc... kind soul on discord and how we were harsh. I disagreed but I can't disagree with the server god even if I was Mommy Amaterasu Possessing the Mother title. So I have two key improvements for you. 1. increase the chapter length, it's better to have it long so it can hit the deep spot 2. get an editor to fix the mistakes in your grammar, better watch out before the grammar nazis arrive As you can see, I'm a lazy ****, the only positive thing about me is my big pp energy even though everyone calls me mommy, mother or mom. It hurts my pride when they don't recognise the domineering aura of my pp. The Little gremli... beautiful children always want to sit on my lap and receive head pats, especially Jason, little guy loves it. Anyway, I think the rant has gone on enough. Just gonna hope the young master is happy with my review, I mean it's pretty long so I think he should be satisfied. Love from Mommy Amaterasu ✌