Review Detail of Scorpion_Shirairyu in My Comic book Harem

Item: My Comic book Harem
Rating: 3

Review detail

Scorpion_ShirairyuLv12yrScorpion_Shirairyu

Dude.... Fuck this character to the core. I read the first 3 chapters and I want to kill him. This is just a opinion that doesn't need to be taken seriously, this is just me expressing my corrosive hatred for these type of characters. To make sure there's no bad blood or flame I'll rate this averagely. -_-.

My Comic book Harem

Deltora

Liked it!

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DeltoraAuthorDeltora

Would you care to elaborate on what kind of character the MC is? I can't grow as a writer if I don't know what the audience doesn't like about my story/characters.

2yr

Scorpion_ShirairyuLv1Scorpion_Shirairyu

The character is a blathering idiot that just blurts out what he plans to do next and should realize that he should keep his mouth shut about things he know would be bad to say but does it anyway. Once again, this is just my hatred of this trope and has nothing to do with your story and my opinion shouldn't matter, this is your story to manipulate, I just don't like that trope from these reincarnated or transmigrated stories.

2yr