So even though this book only has 21 chapters, it’s extremely promising so far. Writing Quality: 5/5, so far I don’t believe I have spotted a single grammatical error, and if there are those that I missed then they are basically negligible, and the story flows really well Stability of Updating: 5/5, I’m not exactly sure since I binged this novel in one go, but it says 8 chapters a week and that’s above average Story Development: 5/5, I really like the premise of this book, and I think that it’s playing out really well in the book, though at this time there are still many mysteries Character Design: 4/5, I love the MC and all of the characters that have been introduced so far however there are 2 problems that I had, first of all, we haven’t seen any real “villains” but there was a typical one dimensional young master who tried to attack the MC for seemingly no reason, and secondly, the MC was an abused child, but opened up to his family extremely quickly, within 1 week. World Background: 5/5, we haven’t really gotten much world background at this point, though it is understandable since there are currently so few chapters I decided to bump my review up to 5 stars simply because the author is extremely responsive, for me currently it’s like 1 am yet the author still responded to my comments pretty quickly, which I consider more important than a few character flaws. TLDR: very good book with a lot of potential, highly recommend
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Thanks for the constructive review! I agree that the MC opened up rather quick, but he wanted to believe, more than anything in the world, that he had finally found a real family and a place he could call home. So far, it's his single hope in life at the moment, after all. I'm super glad that you are enjoying the story though! Regarding the villains, I guess you'll just have to wait and see : )
