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SumGai
SumGaiLv113yr
2021-04-11 01:41

Okay. This is my honest review. This novel is... decent. There are very, very few grammar mistakes if you don't count the other constantly forgetting to end a paragraph with a period as a grammar mistake. and the stability of the uploads is very good, though do understand my criteria isn't frequent updates, but being sure that the author will give me a chapter at a designated time every time. and for this guy, it's once a week, not bad, but definitely not good. as for the story development, it's not bad. I've read 103 chapters, and the story is pretty average. character design is also not that bad. the frequently appearing characters aren't 2d, but they're also not 3d. kind of 2.5 d, if that makes any sense. the side characters tho, are 2d, which is a problem. as for world-building, it's going pretty slow. and there isn't any sign of that changing. it's good in the way that there aren't any info-dumps. bad in the way that the world-building is unsatisfying. I can tell you what you can expect and not expect. (Might contain small, but relatively easy to guess spoilers) 1- the MC becoming strong very quickly. 2- the MC has a very OP bloodline and father 3- the MC keeps shocking everyone because he grows monstrously fast. 4- The story/novel itself is extremely idealistic. nobody is evil, nobody does any bullying, nobody is anything but friendly, which is extremely weird. and that's it, really. Oh, also harem, definitely a plus. If you have nothing to do, do give it a try. although I might seem like I'm roasting it, but it's definitely not bad, as far as my reading experience goes, there are much worse ones out there

Seed Of The Stars

Alanala
4.3
218 Chs

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Alanala
AlanalaAuthor

This is my very first novel. Thank you for giving it a chance! I usually release more than one a week, but I’ve recently started a full time job along with dual enrollment in college. It’s been hard to balance all of the things I want to do, but I hope that you will stay along for the ride. I’ll work on my conflict + antagonists in the upcoming arc, so please keep reading!

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Architman
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This is honestly one of the best novels I read, the characters are well made, the world is interesting, I don't have to wait a year for an update ya know the stuff ya want in a web novel. Anyway, I recommend everyone to at least try out this novel cause ya won't regret it.

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Ambroshus
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In my professional consumer opinion the author did a great job in keeping the novel interesting considering that most other novels have cool training and getting stronger parts but the rest is just dry copy pasted comedy but this one has both interesting during training and none training parts so that you don’t get bored or question if it’s worth reading..... Now that said the novel does have some downsides and that can never be avoided BUT compared to other novels this shines in that it is a very minimal amount instead of you questioning why the mc only has two brain cells to rub together and is somehow smarter than everyone else. All in all I’d say that it is a good read and there were some parts where I couldn’t wait to continue reading

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Glamouranj
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This fantasy story is written nicely. I found myself thoroughly enjoying it. I was kinda bothered to the symbol you used for quoting instead of a quotation mark or maybe t'was my first time to encounter that. However, the plot is perfectly fit for the chapters. I'm adding it to my collection.

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mjayauthor
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I am really liking this novel. How we can see the character's thoughts in a limited way. You did that very well. The back and forth between the characters really creates the ******* and builds the scenes for the training and dueling. I am adding this to my collection. Can't wait to read more

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mymysticworld
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The story is interesting, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.

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Nyxus_
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Just a bit "Meh". I find it very difficult to read and a bit boring in its progression.....................,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,,,,,,,.,,.,,.,,.,

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Will5010
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This book seems to have the foundations of a great book but is let down by poor writing. if you want to see what I mean I've left comments in the first chapter. another thing is the way speech is handled, having the name after every speech is disjointing. try to build the speech into the sentences. the name after style could then be used for greater effect in confusing fight scenes or when lots of aside characters are talking. Also in general work on the way you express ideas. eg aghh its my alarm is both a unnatural thing to say and disjointing. instead he jolted awake, realizing the dragon roars were in fact his alarm clock. This only an example, there's many ways to do it but this book has a lot of potential if you go back and rewrite it.

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