Review Detail of Darcksage in The Remnant Alliance (General Grievous x Rwby)

Item: The Remnant Alliance (General Grievous x Rwby)
Rating: 1.8

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DarcksageLv113yrDarcksage

Chapters are 500 words or less.. The English isn't all that great, the formating and editing is also lackluster. Maybe Author should focus on spending more time on each chapters and making them longer and better.

The Remnant Alliance (General Grievous x Rwby)

Draco_409

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Draco_409AuthorDraco_409

I am sorry to hear about that, but it's just how I write. I made this story from a different app(Wattpad) so I just wanted to show more people from a different app(This one).

3yr

Draco_409AuthorDraco_409

At Wattpad you needed short chapters. I didn't know that over at Webnovel you needed long stories. (Even tho there are some stories that are over 2,000 pages long here)

3yr

scootsLv3scoots

Why such a weak character that can’t get strong enough to defeat Salem or ozpin/ozma alone drop

3yr

Draco_409AuthorDraco_409

This is the legends version of Grievous, who is way stronger. With his lightsabers and his speed he is deadly, any weapons from Remnant would get cut in half unless they were also a lightsaber.

scoots:Why such a weak character that can’t get strong enough to defeat Salem or ozpin/ozma alone drop
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3yr

Draco_409AuthorDraco_409

And Grievous isn't weak he is a cyborg so if he fought Salem with his lightsabers he would cut her down and never get tired while doing so.

scoots:Why such a weak character that can’t get strong enough to defeat Salem or ozpin/ozma alone drop
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MostRandomDudeLv2MostRandomDude

'sips tea while fighting Salem' "So uh, when will you die?"

Draco_409:And Grievous isn't weak he is a cyborg so if he fought Salem with his lightsabers he would cut her down and never get tired while doing so.
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3yr