the biggest problem the story has is things that happen off screen. information is obtained, system ui is explored, and abilities are obtained without any reader knowledge. The entire digital realm and what that means is ignored entirely, acting the same as a system-magic transmigration to another atom-based world. the final major problem I can think of is that mc has changed class three times already and I have no idea what that means, if it means anything. the above being said, it's a fun story with developed characters that are different from each other and interact in funny and interesting ways. character growth may be abrupt, but it's better than stagnant characters.
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Thanks for the review! And apologies, all the system ui and abilities coming out of nowhere is no coincidence—I had taken the time to explain that stuff in volume 1 in the old version, but now i'm in the process of axing most of it. Thus, most mentions of abilities in later chapters are pending removal. The things you've praised in your comments are what I wanted to focus more on in the first placd, instead of struggling to keep track of skills and stats, so I'm glad it seems to bd working! I'll try to work harder to get this ship cleaned up eieieieieieie
