Review Detail of Rokuhine in Monsters Of The Abyss

SO- REREVIEW BECAUSE THIS HAS BE RE-UPLOADED. Last time I horribly said something tasteless in a review which was about your personal life. I am so sorry about that. Focusing on the story though, I love how you're going with the same plot but with more polished concepts. I, however, do miss the auxiliary chapters you made explaining the magic system of the world. I would've loved if that was still there. Overall, looking at the previous to what you're writing now, there's a lot of improvement and that's why I'm giving this book a higher score than before. Keep writing Jordi.