Review Detail of rommel_bulos in The Rise Of A Porter

the writer overly complicate every plot progression just to increase word count. the problem is the story become unnecessary convoluted and unrealistic. even though it is only 500 chapter the writing style is bloated and unfocus. im at chapter 300 and i feel that you can remove 30 percent of the chapter without affecting the story. shaving chapters could have improve the writing. if this novel is a dance then there is a lot of ungraceful and unnecessary movement that make you no longer appreciate the product. my review could be harsh maybe because i just read the works of steinbeck before reading these. and there is a lot of difference in writing quality.