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elano77
elano77Lv124yr
2020-08-07 03:57

This... This story is fvcking fantastic. The characters are multi-dimensional, MC has a sensible head on his shoulders. This is one of those few fantasies where the MC feels human. He is not a personification of the smartest people on earth that would always make the best decision in pressured, sensitive and often difficult situations. He is not the personification of the japanese ideal MC who has females falling for him for no real reason left and right all the while being clueless or having a stupid justification for not engaging with them romantically. He is not even a Western Camelot or King Arthur that holds himself to unrealistic moral codes and rises above human failings. No, no. He is a real, imperfect human who would make the same mistakes or have the same quirks as any reader. Being able to accurately depict that in an MC is something unprecedented in fantasy. The world building and pacing are steady, the work feels grounded, the writing is fluid but vivid and there is the right amount of suspense. The only thing stopping me from giving this work 5 stars is that I wish the author would update more. It is an unrealistic wish as they update daily and steadily, but the wait every day kills me.

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AkshatArpit
AkshatArpitAuthor

Thanks for the review! This the best review I ever got! I'm glad to know that you like the story so much. I can't thank you enough!

FlyingHippopotamus
FlyingHippopotamusLv15

«MC has a sensible head on his shoulders.» I’m in!

Emporer_of_Time
Emporer_of_TimeLv4

What, were we even reading the same story.

Tema_Tomo
Tema_TomoLv1

bro this is the best review

Robrob_Bang
Robrob_BangLv1

Fine that's all i needed.

kitabzou
kitabzouLv4

definitely one of the best I've seen

Wiredu_Beatrice
Wiredu_BeatriceLv3

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AriosAeonVonBelser
AriosAeonVonBelserLv4

Can anyone tell me what the MC and other significant characters look like? Like his sister and his potential love interest.

Kingsav_Savage
Kingsav_SavageLv12

🙈😂

Emporer_of_Time:What, were we even reading the same story.
Jordan_Lockhart
Jordan_LockhartLv12

is the mc evil? I've been trying to find an evil mc for a while but with no luck.(the cover is making me think that the mc is evil, or at the very least an edgelord, which I could also go for)

AkshatArpit:Thanks for the review! This the best review I ever got! I'm glad to know that you like the story so much. I can't thank you enough!
AkshatArpit
AkshatArpitAuthor

Not evil. but you want an Evil MC then you can read my other novel "The Rise of a Tribal Deadbeat". It's just starting but it'll have an evil MC.

Jordan_Lockhart:is the mc evil? I've been trying to find an evil mc for a while but with no luck.(the cover is making me think that the mc is evil, or at the very least an edgelord, which I could also go for)
Jordan_Lockhart
Jordan_LockhartLv12

ok thanks I'll check it out

AkshatArpit:Not evil. but you want an Evil MC then you can read my other novel "The Rise of a Tribal Deadbeat". It's just starting but it'll have an evil MC.
little_moon_fox
little_moon_foxLv14

if you want to read a book with an evil mc you should check out inhuman warlock see if you like it

Jordan_Lockhart:is the mc evil? I've been trying to find an evil mc for a while but with no luck.(the cover is making me think that the mc is evil, or at the very least an edgelord, which I could also go for)
Jordan_Lockhart
Jordan_LockhartLv12

actually I'm already reading it, I'm on chap 143 or something like that, and yeah it's one of my top 3 favorite webnovels

little_moon_fox:if you want to read a book with an evil mc you should check out inhuman warlock see if you like it
little_moon_fox
little_moon_foxLv14

oh I see I'm on ch. 97 at the moment, do you know any that are similar to that

Jordan_Lockhart:actually I'm already reading it, I'm on chap 143 or something like that, and yeah it's one of my top 3 favorite webnovels
Jordan_Lockhart
Jordan_LockhartLv12

epic of the demonic sage, alien evolution system, and the greatest sinner have evil MC's and they're pretty good reads as well

little_moon_fox:oh I see I'm on ch. 97 at the moment, do you know any that are similar to that
little_moon_fox
little_moon_foxLv14

thx

Jordan_Lockhart:epic of the demonic sage, alien evolution system, and the greatest sinner have evil MC's and they're pretty good reads as well
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