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Marxrexter_llema
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I like the system, but I don't like the mc not being able to interfere with the plot a bit too restrictive and being able to return back to earth after the story makes it as though mc is on a trip to one piece where everything is just fantasy and all of the people he met are just characters in a comic. if someone is getting a new life he should die there if not it stops readers from being immersed in the story,it's just like having a harem or being able to eat unlimited devil fruits. it just takes away the pleasure of reading. I just mentioned it as the way you wrote felt like you didn't want the mc to simply get all the girls and stand on top of the world and become a young master who cuts buddha if he stands in his way and cuts devil in his way that kind of protagonist. It's a good read and don't drop.

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