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Magic bounce would be boring MC is a do or die kind of aggressive character it suits characters like urahara but jackson is too intimidating for such a move. I would prefer if jackson was completely healed but could only train for 2 years.
I like the system, but I don't like the mc not being able to interfere with the plot a bit too restrictive and being able to return back to earth after the story makes it as though mc is on a trip to one piece where everything is just fantasy and all of the people he met are just characters in a comic. if someone is getting a new life he should die there if not it stops readers from being immersed in the story,it's just like having a harem or being able to eat unlimited devil fruits. it just takes away the pleasure of reading. I just mentioned it as the way you wrote felt like you didn't want the mc to simply get all the girls and stand on top of the world and become a young master who cuts buddha if he stands in his way and cuts devil in his way that kind of protagonist. It's a good read and don't drop.
Keep going don't drop the story and don't make the character too OP. đđđ Also please upload one chapter a day if you can keep the same quality, I'd recommend you save some chapters and upload them everyday it helps in revising and editing the chapter before you upload them giving increased quality and steady uploading.đ