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2021-10-20 01:12

I couldn't keep reading due to the fact the main character is being so underwhelming considering every single advantage he has, yet with all his intellect the author limits him to an example of sheldon cooper? Meanwhile he has 50 years of live experience of combat/fighting? reasonably overrated, however it dumps all dc universe races, their situations on you on chapter 4. So it is atleast educational to the interested? My limited view might be due to only reaching like chapter 5, but with how the MC was being built, and how the world was being explained i saw no reason to read further. - It might seem very critical of me to say all this, i believe in direct criticism. Author is doing a good job from what i can see. And by no means do i think his writing is "Bad" It can only get better.

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Edgelord666
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bro You saud you read till chapter 5 please read till chapter 10, cause people generally think you can only go for one way by building the mc, mine goes other way.

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