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Evil_For_the_WIN
Evil_For_the_WINLv54yr
2020-08-25 03:32

I'm not a fan of Star Wars. I barely know anything about it but this story managed to hook me and now I'm only wanting more. This is well written and author seemed to edit the chapters when a mistake is pointed out. Thanks for the amazing work and don't drop.

Star Wars: The Last Je'daii

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Imperial_Fox
Imperial_FoxLv5

Frickin amazing, the grammar is good, writing quality is top notch, characters are introduced in the best way, As the story hasn't gone much ahead, I can't say anything about development, the writing style of the author is pretty unique and very good, not only that, he actually keeps us entertained and leaves us wanting to read next chaps. In just two chaps you will know the difference between this and other fics. Also the system could barely be considered a system, it's better to consider a group of teachers, each a grandmaster in their categories. The only thing that resembles a system is the status page. I definitely suggest you to read this.

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ClearSkySage
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I liked it so far, my only problem at the start is that I had to constantly deal with other characters that I am not that much interested in, but as time passed I became more curious and interested in then.

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lstreader
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I like the story. It's a good idea about how there is a system, but it isn't overpowered in any way, and just helps him improve himself with knowledge. Only negative I can find is that this story hasn't been updated for a looooong time. Truly a disappointment, this could have been good.

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LinYang
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This is definitely one of the best-quality novels I have seen on WN. The author is clearly not an *******, and writes in an easy to follow style. There were very few punctuation errors. The premise is interesting, and having the setting as the Star Wars universe opens up a wide range of possibilities for plot. Looking forward to seeing both the author and the story grow.

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....................................... it's really good.............................

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MS_Chavez
MS_ChavezLv2

This story is interesting enough even for a casual fan like myself. It was amusing to read comments by more dedicated fans as I read. Even so I didn’t feel like I was missing anything by not being a more dedicated fan. It could stand on its own fairly well. I did find some of it a little... hokey but the story seems pretty self aware and fun so it works well. I had some minor issues with some of the pacing at points, but nothing that ever caused me to stop reading. I skimmed a little when it got to info-dumpy, but it really only happened once or twice. Overall, its well written fan fiction. There are minimal grammatical and punctuation errors. The ones I did find would be easily remedied by a half ways decent copy editor. I can understand why this story has a significant read count. It’s a interesting fan fiction of a very popular franchise with pretty darned good grammar and writing. It has a lot of potential and I hope the author keeps at it.

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GloriouslyFamous
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Well done with the quality writing! The story is very interesting and written very well. The descriptions dialogues and the world was written with rich language and delivered smoothly. The MC's character is dynamic and his personality is interesting. Another great thing is that the author has described the plot very well, and the writing does not require knowledge of the series. So practically anyone can pick this up and enjoy the story. My only recommendation is that when he gets the system, it is better to keep the Name, Health, Stamina ..." as one chunk and then introduce the grandmasters then show the menu for the skills. This is just a suggestion. Overall, a great read!

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Lord_Meph1sto
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Pretty good wuality for a fanfic. I don't usually read star wars fanfic but now I am thinking otherwise. Great flow and writing style with minimal grammer mistakes.Story is still in the infant stage but it is really promising. Best wishes for the fanfic.

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