Item: Star Wars: The Last Je'daii
Rating: 5
Author: ClearSkySage

ClearSkySageLv44yr

2020-08-06 23:32

I liked it so far, my only problem at the start is that I had to constantly deal with other characters that I am not that much interested in, but as time passed I became more curious and interested in then.

Star Wars: The Last Je'daii

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