Review Detail of Ysabel_xox in His Accountant Princess

The story is interesting, you can portray the characters personalities well, the plot and can describe the scenes. There are some things that you need to improve like more punctuation and I'm a bit confused at first at the first chapter the message thing, maybe you can use (:) but after a few seconds I get it. It's a good story that can be improve into a better story. Keep up the good work author! 👍👍