Review Detail of lvly in His Accountant Princess

Later chaps are better than earlier ones . First few needs a little more editing and details.Like that villain her character needs a little more strength and zila's brother and sis in law their character needs details. Anyway these are the first few chaps of the story. Can't judge too much here rather read till the end. Plot got me hooked though and I am curious what happens next. Book stays in my library.