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2022-08-03 01:55

if the MC is a transmigrator the story would have been better. its like giving a Nuclear missile to a chiwawa who does not know what to do with it nor knowing anything about the plot of the naruto verse? is it really enjoyable reading about the MC that keep questioning things(acting dumb) when we the readers already have the answers to? sigh...i am not even curious about the capabilities Ryujin jakka and I even know the plot of naruto verse. When I see the naive MC being oblivious to all this without anything new to add its kind of annoying and boring.Not to mention when the MC jumps to conclusion sigh. for example all these could happen : seeing black zetsu "who are you? I will join you to bring my parents back"............. seeing Obito, "I believe you because you are madara"................... seeing Danzo "I will put my life on the line to protect you benefactor"... seeing Hinata "I realize that I love you" ..instant rip to boruto seeing Ino "I realize that I love you" ..instant rip to inojin seeing Jiraya/tsunade "sorry I have to kill you because you are friends with the snake"... conclusion: A NAIVE DUMB MC WITH A FAKE RYUJIN JAKKA WHO IS A PHEONIX INSTEAD OF A DRAGON. Writing Quality-4 STAR.................................good Story Development-2 STAR.........................not interesting Character Design - 1 STAR.........................irritating World Background-4 STAR.........................got narutoverse vibe

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