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Primordial_Phoenix
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2020-07-10 10:59

Pretty good fanfic butt probably not going to last because there's just too many worlds meshed together for this not to get dropped there's a reason why authors write fanfiction that have Multiverse travel where the MC travels to different universes instead of universes meshed together because it's incredibly hard to write about a world that has so many different storylines either contradicting each other or just outright not fitting together it just doesn't usually work out so I'll still read it it's just I'm not going to hope that this novel actually gets finished because it's most likely not going to

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Elzik
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I see where your coming from but what story lines are you on about? Cause I'm writing my own. Yeah theres a few world's mixed together and I'll take some characters and maybe a little plot but it's not going to be any of their stories it's going to be mine about Fenrisúlfr

Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10

Yeah you're kind of right I should have worded my review better but I'm too lazy to delete it and rewrite it What I should have said is their mythologies surrounding the creatures in their worlds aren't really that compatible with each other like Twilight vampires and tvd vampires or witches from The Vampire Diaries and witches from Harry Potter

Elzik:I see where your coming from but what story lines are you on about? Cause I'm writing my own. Yeah theres a few world's mixed together and I'll take some characters and maybe a little plot but it's not going to be any of their stories it's going to be mine about Fenrisúlfr
Elzik
ElzikAuthor

Yeah I understand but I kinda of fixed that in the first chapter, it's kind of like the personal abilities of the twilight vampires but they burn in the sun and don't sparkle well unless they have an artifact or are an original, **** wolfs werewolfs with both full and partial transformations, true bloods fae. The witches and wizards of the wizarding world and tvd witches arnt that different most use rituals if I remember correctly or are keepers of balance like druids from **** wolf. If you get what I mean I'll explain in more detail when he actually comes across some of the supernatural beings

Primordial_Phoenix:Yeah you're kind of right I should have worded my review better but I'm too lazy to delete it and rewrite it What I should have said is their mythologies surrounding the creatures in their worlds aren't really that compatible with each other like Twilight vampires and tvd vampires or witches from The Vampire Diaries and witches from Harry Potter
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Will there be romance in this? And can you tell me who the romantic interest is if there is?

Elzik:Yeah I understand but I kinda of fixed that in the first chapter, it's kind of like the personal abilities of the twilight vampires but they burn in the sun and don't sparkle well unless they have an artifact or are an original, **** wolfs werewolfs with both full and partial transformations, true bloods fae. The witches and wizards of the wizarding world and tvd witches arnt that different most use rituals if I remember correctly or are keepers of balance like druids from **** wolf. If you get what I mean I'll explain in more detail when he actually comes across some of the supernatural beings
Elzik
ElzikAuthor

yes there's romance she's an OC kind of

BreezyNovels:Will there be romance in this? And can you tell me who the romantic interest is if there is?
jhsilver
jhsilverLv12

Is there a reason why? You have combined many worlds each with many interesting characters, I fail to see why you would choose an OC? The only reason that comes to mind is that you find these characters lacking.

Elzik:yes there's romance she's an OC kind of
Elzik
ElzikAuthor

well she is part of the wizarding world history but not a fleshed out character plus none of the stories have begun yet

jhsilver:Is there a reason why? You have combined many worlds each with many interesting characters, I fail to see why you would choose an OC? The only reason that comes to mind is that you find these characters lacking.
jhsilver
jhsilverLv12

ok so she is technically not an OC

Elzik:well she is part of the wizarding world history but not a fleshed out character plus none of the stories have begun yet
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