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yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv144yr
2020-07-14 08:10

It's an alright concept it's just that you suck at english and grammar. Their was literally a misspelled word or some type of grammar problem in every paragraph. I'm not overreacting, after I noticed it I started to really focus on that and it was always a misspelled word, no uppercase, the sentence just being incoherent. You should take a break or hiatus to get at least your grammar up to an higher level.

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DDax
DDaxLv5

u grammar freaks are rly something man ...

Fallout_Armageddon
Fallout_ArmageddonLv14

true, but I can understand where they are coming from even if I myself have found I don't care enough to be annoyed at grammar most the time

DDax:u grammar freaks are rly something man ...
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