It's an alright concept it's just that you suck at english and grammar. Their was literally a misspelled word or some type of grammar problem in every paragraph. I'm not overreacting, after I noticed it I started to really focus on that and it was always a misspelled word, no uppercase, the sentence just being incoherent. You should take a break or hiatus to get at least your grammar up to an higher level.
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