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lazy006
lazy006Lv104yr
2021-01-28 19:32

The story would b totally good f it was not that focussed n flirting and cuddling... I was totally bummed by it after all the story's name is The Lunar Cultivator w/c made me guess that it is more about the struggle and tribulation of the MC that will help her persue strength and power but what do I read is a smooth sailing life of the MC n cultivation and her being pampered by her adopted father and lover. She is an orphan and was treated like a trash since growing up n the orphanage but her personality is totally opposite of what she should be... f I could discribe her it would be... she is like a princess that is shelttered away from the outside world... She is contented of what she has after tasting of being cared off. I don't see her determeanition 2 bcome strong instead all I see is it bcome her obligation 2 cultivate so the MC syrayed away 2 her vow b4 her master and 2 herself not 2 be bullied by others... Lunar Cultivator means the MC has a yin constitution body that will make her coveted by many cultivators but I don't see that at all

Lunar Cultivator

Lynhart
4.8
187 Chs

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I really don't write reviews but I really am interested in where this book will go but so far it really is interesting and they write and explain things really well

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5 star review from the author here! The story will contain my experiences on reading other novels including other people criticism to them. However I will absolutely create an original. It might have similarities as there are already alot of cultivation novels but I will try to reduce them. Similarities include the personality of my FL. There might be romance however it will be a girl love. I dont want to follow the cliche of having an OP ML or OP armor. The things I write are what I read or researched about chinese culture and the world of cultivation. There might be unique things added and may or may not be correct if compared to their real life counterpart.

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I really enjoy the feel of this novel. The jabs at other cultivation novel tropes and the overall chill vibe make this a nice and relaxing read. The characters are down to earth and feel like they act their age for the most part. The romance is fluffy and the leads fit well together. Overall would recomend the story definetly deserves more attention

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This image is what i thought about when I read some part of the story. the story itself is good and wholesome most times, but it Does go fast a lot then a normal story, Surprisingly even though it goes fast I enjoyed it’s fast pace but that’s probably because I was reading a story previously before this that stretch moments longer than it should be And the pacing is all over, that is one thing i like about this it goes the same constant speed throughout the whole story.

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Love it ~(˘▾˘~) ~(˘▾˘)~ (~˘▾˘)~ Yuri is the best. ~(˘▾˘~) ~(˘▾˘)~ (~˘▾˘)~~(˘▾˘~) ~(˘▾˘)~ (~˘▾˘)~~(˘▾˘~) ~(˘▾˘)~ (~˘▾˘)~~(˘▾˘~) ~(˘▾˘)~ (~˘▾˘)~

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Good book so fare cool leads and nice world. Also cute love story. The fight second are well done as well. Good job auther keep up the good work and yoi will have many dedicated readers. Only down side is the short chapters but that is fine.

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10/10 would read again.................................................................................,.....................................

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I like it

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The writing quality is excellent but has the occasional typo or grammar error. The content isn’t anything too new it plays on many of the the cultivation novel tropes. But it is yuri so bonus points... the cultivation system is interesting as well but the romance aspect is still in a fledgling state. Keep up the great work.

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