Review Detail of Oppo_Red in Isabella's Magical Space
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Apocalypse rebirth magic ,i'm shamelessly rating my novel. When i wrote the synopsis,i wasnt thinking much so now that i see it, its dull hahahah dunno if i can edit it. anyways please dont judge it right a way and give me a little of your time. Please give me some hearts likes and power stones,waiting for comments and suggestions!thankie much!mwamwamwa!
Isabella's Magical Space
Oppo_Red
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For me I'd say ways to improve story Remove the stuff about the mother and father in an apocalyptic world that stuff doesn't matter Have her win. The money in a lottery and how she is looked down upon by in-laws creating more conflict with them Have her invest her savings in a company that is about to release ground breaking project that increases her wealth 10/ 100fold