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Sital_Dangi_5129
Sital_Dangi_5129Lv14yr
2020-08-11 14:13

Really entertaining book so far. Thank you writer for writing this fanfic totally entertaining from original anime I really enjoyed reading this book I would recommend this to other Pokemon friend out there.. Best wishes from me.

In the world of pokemon

Nirjung_Dangi
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Rabin_Subedi
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Knees weak arms are heavy there is vomit on his sweater already mom's spaghetti he is nervous but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs.

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Johnfromamerica
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Best Pokemon book out there I really love the way you are developing the story. Thank you for writing such a book. I hope you will continue writing more and more chapter. I will surely support you financially please keep on writing more and more chapter., , ...........................

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Sujan_Rai
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Pursuit your path of purpose my author really loving your work 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😘😍😍:😘😘😍😘😘😍😘😍😍😘😍😘😍😍😍😘😘😍😍😍😘😍

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ANIM_VIA
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Appricate your work man just chill and keep on providing us with more generating chapters bro.....😒🌏🌏🌏🌏🌎🌍🌍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁

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Stevethestark
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Hello there Really nice novel you got there author. And who mr.knight88? It git me really confused man who is he?...love your porce of art man....

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FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv15

Writing Quality 3: Generally good, alot of minor grammar mistakes but it is usually something comprehensible because it will be either just like a simple sentence or a word like envy used instead of envious or guilty instead of blaming(think that's google translates fault). Otherwise sentence structure and flow is good. Things are actually capitalized when they should be and correct punctuation is actually used, so the story doesnt look like it was written by a 5 year old but instead by an ***** learning a new language. Stability of Updating 4: Its not a 5 and quite honestly almost a 3 because I haven't seen a new chapter be posted in a few days. Story Development 4: Almost gave a 3 but I think it's too harsh a review this early in the story. You can clearly tell when time passes and how much time had passed when scenes transition, and right now it seems to be going sort of like the anime just with different interactions happening and with the cast at a higher age. Character Design 4: Just because there's no OC character yet, but it's not lower than 4 because these characters have a placed established in my mind either from the anime or other fanfics. World Background 5: basically everything you know from the games and the anime, but author introduced a few details I am not aware of that I didnt know beforehand but they might be original details because I've never seen another author give them in their fanfic so I give the author a 5 for initiative and possible originality here. All in all, don't go in expecting a great read or god like use of the english language but don't go in thinking the story is gonna be **** because it's not so far, it's just kind of average is all.

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Nirjung_Dangi
Nirjung_DangiAuthor

It's me author reviewing my own book from my point of view I love my work do your guys love It if you then please rate my book that helps me to grow

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iamthanos
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Hello I live in earth iths your home badampadam baddmmrehh we live in earth it's our home. 😎🌍😀🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍

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iampokom
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Woooo***w nice book please write more more chapter I am loving it love from India😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😘😍😍😘😘😘

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