Review Detail of hal_courson in Return of Supreme Emperor

Item: Return of Supreme Emperor
Rating: 4

Review detail

hal_coursonLv153yrhal_courson

The story so far is good but all the mistakes in the writing such as words being missed spelled and sentences being out of order hurt the story as it can be sometimes difficult to understand.

Return of Supreme Emperor

mrCat

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mrCatAuthormrCat

yeah, I know... my Grammer is Shi* I'll try to improve my writing skills more in the future novels... thanks for reading and giving your things on it...

3yr

mrCatAuthormrCat

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mrCat:yeah, I know... my Grammer is Shi* I'll try to improve my writing skills more in the future novels... thanks for reading and giving your things on it...

3yr