Review Detail of mrmrcia in Rebirth of the Phoenix God

Is arcanists derived from arsonists? :> I really appreciate how descriptive you are with your words, that Fen's torture was even vivid to me. (You're a sadist, sloth) You honestly don't skimp on your words, that's why it's a pleasure to read such descriptive sceneries. I adore how you slowly built your world rather than dumping all of its specificities in one chapter. However, I do admit that the earlier chapters were quite hard to follow because of the vagueness, owing to the mystified names of the characters. Overall, this novel is spewing fire! :> My favourite so far is Mark, though he's not really that unique of a character, his persistence is a pleasure to read. Though I might not like Fen a tad, cause I can't quite get a grasp on his character. You are really a great writer. Although, there were just some misha** with the use of punctuation marks and incorrect verb tenses.