Review Detail of ProProcrastination in Swallowing The Spider
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Story is confusing and has a lot of plot holes. Despite the same character being different diensions/times, the character development makes no sense. Unless you already have written all of the plots for marvel, the character developments, his thoughts etc, the DC character makes no sense. Simply having the DC character react in a certain way based on a development in the marvel past we just read about is not how realistic. I have tried reading just the marvel and DC aspects seperately however it still does not flow. Dont want to even get into the whole intelligence thing.... I think their could be potential in the style of writing, however their is no sense of time difference between the marvel timeline MC and the MC DC timeline. Maybe if the marvel side was planned out thoroughly or wrItten beforehand it could work.
Swallowing The Spider
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partly agree with you friend, I have to author the author to do something different, but there are times when things get bad for those who like to have a continuous and fluid reading, the reason? Simple, there won't be enough chapters before he jumps to the dc, in other words, the story gets broken and you have to wait or start reading the dc part even if it hinders your reading experience.
dukroger:partly agree with you friend, I have to author the author to do something different, but there are times when things get bad for those who like to have a continuous and fluid reading, the reason? Simple, there won't be enough chapters before he jumps to the dc, in other words, the story gets broken and you have to wait or start reading the dc part even if it hinders your reading experience.
It depends on the situation, if a comment can serve in more than one place and situation, then I can copy part of it or even all of it, as long as it makes sense and fits the subject.
Lethal_Drinker:so how many times are you planning to copy paste the same review