Review Detail of SnowPenguin in City treasure hunters

Item: City treasure hunters
Rating: 4

Review detail

SnowPenguinLv33yrSnowPenguin

The world is interesting with a setting built up from the first chapter through all the small, little details. My main issue is the inconsistent grammar and punctuation that appears in a few segments every now and again.

City treasure hunters

Gourmet_DAO

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Gourmet_DAOAuthorGourmet_DAO

English is my third language, my second is Russian, I try to write better. But the grammar is still lame. I agree with you about grammar mistakes.

3yr

SnowPenguinLv3SnowPenguin

There are not too bad. They appear for a bit then completely vanish. I can write out a few paragraph comments and correct them, if you want.

3yr