Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in City treasure hunters

Curious. The plot certainly is interesting. I don't really read cultivation stories, but this seems good enough for my tastes. Storytelling-wise, I felt that the prose felt a bit stiff at times; reading like a monotonous voice robotically telling a story. Some of the dialogue felt like this as well, though not at the same degree as the general prose. All in all, a story with a lot of potential. Keep on writing👍