Review Detail of Sharelvandor in Serendipity - A wink from the fate

All I can say is that I love the story. I was giggling and swooning like a teenager while reading it that I almost forgot I need to leave a review. There are minimal grammatical errors that I think can be easily corrected. And I just want to say that I really love the action scene in the opening chapter. It was really well-written. Good job Author!