Review Detail of Brian70707 in The Gamer Avenger

first chapter was decent then i dropped at second chapter with the first quest Conquering/ ruling a world in truth would be boring If i had written the story i would have had my mc be dropped in a character insert as wolverines brother Abilities: healing, enhanced senses, and a dimensional storage area with limited space ( since its an intimentional traveler the travel gave them the ability) . My mc wouldnt have claws or nails but since he or she would have gamer ability then he or she could develop abilties and skills by constantly using them and fighting. Develop through the wars fought Develop through daily sparing with sabertooth and wolverine Develop through learning magic Develop through learning martial arts Develop through learning science and technology studies Raise funds by storing memorabilia then selling it Raise funds by storing certain wines to develop Raise funds by investing in likes of stark industries