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2021-10-16 14:00

This book was excellent! It was very well written, the plot was awesome, and I absolutely loved all the characters - especially the main couple. I only had two issues with the story that weren't resolved. (1) We never found out what really happened to XueYa's & YaYun's mother. Who actually killed her? (2) We also never found out how & why XueYa lost his eye and fingers. We learned YaYun was responsible for it, but I really wanted to hear the story of how that happened because eveyone, including XueYa, kept saying it was an accident and YaYun didn't mean it. However, I'm pretty sure no one can stab out someone's eye and cut off two of their fingers without meaning to do so intentionally! Other than those two issues, the story was extremely good and is definitely worth reading!! 😍😍💖💗😘💞

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