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TabbyOkamiSan
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2020-07-27 10:53

The worldbuilding and story structure was amazing, while allowing the characters and background to be developed without seeming block or poorly put together. This story adds mythology and Chinese culture to a creative new world!

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Thank you so much for taking the time to write the review!😊

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Thank you for writing such an amazing story, author-sama!

LinShui:Thank you so much for taking the time to write the review!😊
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TabbyOkamiSan:Thank you for writing such an amazing story, author-sama!
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