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LiquorSquad
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I have the same problem with the novel as many other users, namely that the plot commits suicide by chapter 546, i don't even mind if all those characters died, what really bother's me its that all those plot threads plus character arcs were cut effectively making most of the 500+ chapters completely meaningless filler, the main characters themselves didn't change that much from start to finish, at first that hated eachother and now they can endure being in the same room. Some say that the plot taking a cyanide pill by chapter 546 was not actually bad and was in fact a bold move by the author, i can at least agree with the second part, shooting yourself in the foot is a REALLY bold move.

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Death... and me

Suiyan

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Suiyan
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Heard that a few times. Still, the novel is on going and still the same position in the rank as ever. Besides, that's not the end of Sunkan Planet Arc as you will find out in the future arcs that had already been released.

PublishedLeaf
PublishedLeafLv14PublishedLeaf

That makes me feel better. I left off on chpt 548 and have been trying to work up courage to continue. Why there are people like him and me is because they want a fairy tale. What you did with that was realistic, you know for a cultivation novel.

Suiyan:Heard that a few times. Still, the novel is on going and still the same position in the rank as ever. Besides, that's not the end of Sunkan Planet Arc as you will find out in the future arcs that had already been released.
Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv3Everythingonurmind

factually no, I haven't heard about ur novel in webnovel discord and community for a while so it kind of fell off even tho I like it.

Suiyan:Heard that a few times. Still, the novel is on going and still the same position in the rank as ever. Besides, that's not the end of Sunkan Planet Arc as you will find out in the future arcs that had already been released.
Dragon912
Dragon912Lv2Dragon912

Wat part of not care about the fact that everyone u cared about just dead is realistic to a cultivation world. I’ve been going through the comments and most people who have a issue wit the planet being blow up are just confused at why the mcs’ don’t care. Like this concept ain’t new but to just have everybody they were literally talking to like a day ago disappear and then act like they didn’t exist in the first place is not bold it’s down right idiotic. At that point why even bring the planet back they don’t seem to care about it smh

PublishedLeaf:That makes me feel better. I left off on chpt 548 and have been trying to work up courage to continue. Why there are people like him and me is because they want a fairy tale. What you did with that was realistic, you know for a cultivation novel.
PublishedLeaf
PublishedLeafLv14PublishedLeaf

Just let people enjoy what they like. If you dont like it, go enjoy something else that you'll like.

Dragon912:Wat part of not care about the fact that everyone u cared about just dead is realistic to a cultivation world. I’ve been going through the comments and most people who have a issue wit the planet being blow up are just confused at why the mcs’ don’t care. Like this concept ain’t new but to just have everybody they were literally talking to like a day ago disappear and then act like they didn’t exist in the first place is not bold it’s down right idiotic. At that point why even bring the planet back they don’t seem to care about it smh
Dragon912
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I dont care if u liked the twist or not. Ur statement “this is realistic to a cultivation world” was crazily false. If the twins were portrayed as cold blooded people then maybe this would have worked but they weren’t. And the author makes it very apparent all throughout the story. a perfect example is the chapter when their sister was born and they saw her.

PublishedLeaf:Just let people enjoy what they like. If you dont like it, go enjoy something else that you'll like.
PublishedLeaf
PublishedLeafLv14PublishedLeaf

I have a different opinion than you and your like that can't happen others cant have opinions cept me opinions arent opinions but facts.

Dragon912:I dont care if u liked the twist or not. Ur statement “this is realistic to a cultivation world” was crazily false. If the twins were portrayed as cold blooded people then maybe this would have worked but they weren’t. And the author makes it very apparent all throughout the story. a perfect example is the chapter when their sister was born and they saw her.
Dragon912
Dragon912Lv2Dragon912

No u said “this was realistic for a cultivation novel” u stated a opinion as fact. I corrected u by saying this is not realistic because the way that the characters reacted to everyone dying right infront of them is not in line with how the author wrote them so there for it is not realistic. Simple

PublishedLeaf:I have a different opinion than you and your like that can't happen others cant have opinions cept me opinions arent opinions but facts.
PublishedLeaf
PublishedLeafLv14PublishedLeaf

You need to relearn what facts abd opinions are. In your opinion you dont think so, thats how opinions work, its not I think this so I'm right, NO I in my opinion think it was and that you need to go back to school to relearn th basics.

Dragon912:No u said “this was realistic for a cultivation novel” u stated a opinion as fact. I corrected u by saying this is not realistic because the way that the characters reacted to everyone dying right infront of them is not in line with how the author wrote them so there for it is not realistic. Simple
Dragon912
Dragon912Lv2Dragon912

😂😂😂go back and read the first comment I responded to. And wat i said is a fact whether u believe it or not doesnt matter if a character acts outside of their character then that makes it not realistic. If i a author write a character and in their characteristics it says “they wouldnt hurt a fly” and then I write them hurting a fly, wouldn’t that be unrealistic. I think u need to go back to school or just read the dictionary because u don’t know wat realistic means.

PublishedLeaf:You need to relearn what facts abd opinions are. In your opinion you dont think so, thats how opinions work, its not I think this so I'm right, NO I in my opinion think it was and that you need to go back to school to relearn th basics.
Dragon912
Dragon912Lv2Dragon912

And once again u were the first to state a opinion as fact. This is why I even responded to u in the first place. If u had said “I feel that this realistic to a cultivation novel” then I would have just said this dude is dumb and moved on but nope u said “this was realistic to a cultivation novel” does ur small brain now comprehend that u stated a opinion as fact?

PublishedLeaf:You need to relearn what facts abd opinions are. In your opinion you dont think so, thats how opinions work, its not I think this so I'm right, NO I in my opinion think it was and that you need to go back to school to relearn th basics.
PublishedLeaf
PublishedLeafLv14PublishedLeaf

A fact is a PROVEN TRUTH, an opinion is a personal view, that represents the OUTLOOK of the person or what they believe or thinks about something. I believed that it was realistic its your opinion that you dont think that it is. Thats what an opinion is all about, having a different view of something. Fact is something that can ve verified or proven to be true, how can you prove that its unrealistic WITHOUT being BIASED. Opinion is a judgement or belief of something, that something is that I believed it to be realistic, I myself not everyone in the world, believed it was a good novel. Fact-A fact is nothing but verifiable truth or reality which are agreed upon by consensus of people. READ A BOOK I believed it to be realistic therefore thats my opinion on it. Its not a concrete fact like 2+2 is 4 Or Grass is green or yellow Or your IQ is insanely low Most Dolphins sleep with one eye open Opinions are like Dogs are the best animal Pizza is the best food Arrow is the best show This novel is realistic You need to relearn what facts and opinions are This was all from what I know and internet research on F and O. Its not that hard, only takes a little time Its ok to admit to being Wrong about facts and opinions you can still have your view on the novel, but a lot of other people enjoy it just cause you dont like it doesn't mean other people cant. You not liking something or thinking somethings non-realistic just means thats your opinion on it. What if you like something or you said this is realistic about your favorite novel ( this is not my favorite novel) and than some guys like no its not and thats a fact.

Dragon912:😂😂😂go back and read the first comment I responded to. And wat i said is a fact whether u believe it or not doesnt matter if a character acts outside of their character then that makes it not realistic. If i a author write a character and in their characteristics it says “they wouldnt hurt a fly” and then I write them hurting a fly, wouldn’t that be unrealistic. I think u need to go back to school or just read the dictionary because u don’t know wat realistic means.
Dragon912
Dragon912Lv2Dragon912

Okay I’ll concede on the opinion and fact debate. For the unrealistic realistic argument Ive explained it above.

PublishedLeaf:A fact is a PROVEN TRUTH, an opinion is a personal view, that represents the OUTLOOK of the person or what they believe or thinks about something. I believed that it was realistic its your opinion that you dont think that it is. Thats what an opinion is all about, having a different view of something. Fact is something that can ve verified or proven to be true, how can you prove that its unrealistic WITHOUT being BIASED. Opinion is a judgement or belief of something, that something is that I believed it to be realistic, I myself not everyone in the world, believed it was a good novel. Fact-A fact is nothing but verifiable truth or reality which are agreed upon by consensus of people. READ A BOOK I believed it to be realistic therefore thats my opinion on it. Its not a concrete fact like 2+2 is 4 Or Grass is green or yellow Or your IQ is insanely low Most Dolphins sleep with one eye open Opinions are like Dogs are the best animal Pizza is the best food Arrow is the best show This novel is realistic You need to relearn what facts and opinions are This was all from what I know and internet research on F and O. Its not that hard, only takes a little time Its ok to admit to being Wrong about facts and opinions you can still have your view on the novel, but a lot of other people enjoy it just cause you dont like it doesn't mean other people cant. You not liking something or thinking somethings non-realistic just means thats your opinion on it. What if you like something or you said this is realistic about your favorite novel ( this is not my favorite novel) and than some guys like no its not and thats a fact.
PublishedLeaf
PublishedLeafLv14PublishedLeaf

I'll take it

Dragon912:Okay I’ll concede on the opinion and fact debate. For the unrealistic realistic argument Ive explained it above.
Odin
OdinLv11Odin

Hi Author, see I would have been a new reader for your book. I was quite intrigued by the synopsis and the good reviews and was ready to start this novel but because what you did at chapter 546 (i read the bad reviews too) now I m thinking why waste my time when 500 chapters is going down the drain. So you see in a way you discouraged new readers. Sorry I m moving on!

Suiyan:Heard that a few times. Still, the novel is on going and still the same position in the rank as ever. Besides, that's not the end of Sunkan Planet Arc as you will find out in the future arcs that had already been released.