Review Detail of Kur0Shir0 in A Lucky? Dude Journey

A good story indeed, my first impression was not the best, when I saw the paragraph beginning with a lowercase letter (I am boring, yes) it already took my impression down there, and when I saw that it had a system with proper awareness I already thought in the system slave cliche, but no, the grammar is incredibly good and easy to read, with some mistakes here and there but tiny, it does not hinder your reading, and the punishments of system quests are incredibly stupid, such as "being allergic to carrot "and etc., not exaggerated like the systems I'm used to reading, so far a good story, I will follow this story, so let's see where it goes XD