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VajiraLv54yr
2020-09-10 02:39

So far in my opinion, chapter 1-20 is pretty much garbage, while at the same time it is not the ultra wish-fulfillment side of the usual Chinese novels, it is the wish-fulfillment side of the be good and do good faction. In other words a whole 180-degree turn from the worst. The author deliberately mentions things he tries to avoid and things he would like to do and the result? Just get dragged around by some random people he despises. No logic in there and simply be there in order to look good and for the plot to advance. Worst thing is that the author goes out of his way to make the protagonist say one thing to the audience while at the same time EXACTLY advancing and forcing the plot in a direction that is completely the opposite of the things that the protagonist should do according to its characterization. Chapter 20-30 is pretty okay, still cliche, and acceptable in my mind. It promises what it delivers, stops going out of its way to make the protagonist a useless piece of shit. Albeit not the best character, it doesn't follow the usual bullshit so far. Bullshit from Chapter 1-20: 4-5 times saying that one should not do that, it is dangerous and the protagonist knows that this is dumb stuff. Proceeds to do that exact thing. Chapter 30 onwards: Pretty decent. Still a little bit of cliche but with better character introduction, a general storyline that makes sense and actually makes me think this might be worth reading. Heck, the Chapter 30 onwards make it seem like the first 20 were deliberately written so badly so that people avoid this book. Advice: Skip the first 20 Chapters, it is a lot as this book only has 60 chapters so far but the first arcs are absolute garbage. It becomes almost a whole different book past these chapters.

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clockz
clockzLv14

thanks... Imma try to find motivation to continue this sht then. Currently I'm stuck at chp 12 or something... imo overall the story is not that bad, but the MC make it unbearable to read.

ShibaTatsuya786
ShibaTatsuya786Lv11

In the actual story, the first 20 chapters are equal to the first 13 chapters. They literally split most of the chapters on two.

ShibaTatsuya786
ShibaTatsuya786Lv11

Webnovel being scummy as usual

ShibaTatsuya786:In the actual story, the first 20 chapters are equal to the first 13 chapters. They literally split most of the chapters on two.
Dark_UNKNOWN
Dark_UNKNOWNLv10

"the usual chinese novels" Ya know its a korean novel not chinese right?? cough alright peace

Quant
QuantLv5

He didn't say it's a chinese novel, he said that this novel is the opposite of the wish fulfillment chinese novels.

Dark_UNKNOWN:"the usual chinese novels" Ya know its a korean novel not chinese right?? cough alright peace
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