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Poker_Pitu
Poker_PituLv42yr
2022-11-16 00:33

I've read up to chapter 600 or so and, like most of the stories here, it has potential but is wasted because everything comes too easy to the protagonist. Does he need to evolve? wild situation happens and he goes to the next level... Does he needs money? boom, a senior gives all of his money to him, or he finds part of a sect's minnning ground and has lots of spirit sones... The plot if filled with situations too convenient added to make him grow easily.

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Sweatysausage
SweatysausageLv4

Yeah besides the beginning it feels like everything goes too well for him. Doesn’t feel like theres any tension cuz you already know he’ll win idk. Also plot armor to the max no risk cuz his spider can come to the rescue gets boring im at 1188 fights are way to drawn out. The characters besides mc feel like they’re just here for mc only the main bad guy has a brain everyone else is pretty bland tbh i wish he left the planet he is on already or forced out or somthing a while ago like i said its drawn out

Aditya_0814
Aditya_0814Lv12

well he is the heir of the cosmos after all ....child of haven....that ring , meeting that spider senior or many more convenient things he encountered can be said it was predetermined ,haven have already made the stage for him.

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asdasdssfLv1

Story is actually written very well as in grammar, flow and characters, plot when considered individually. But big problem is how mc and plot connects, or should I say doesn't connect. Mc just doesn't have much agency and there's not much internal motivations in story form mc to do what he does. It seems like author develops some interesting plot, and then mc is made to flow trough that plot like puppet, mc just doesn't seem to have agency. There's also the problem of mc being constantly bailed out by his ring when stuff gets even slightly hard, it's always some magical thing that bails him out, not his own intellect, skill or perseverance. This again reduces mc's agency, it's just very lame. It would not matter if it was just sometimes, but both of this things happen constantly. Good example is whole thing happening in mc's village, he was already ready to go, he didn't have any reason to stay, no friends or family, no lure of great rewards, and again he was planning to leave. But then author made the plot happen, which I do agree is great when considered in isolation, but mc just started to participate in solving this mystery and helping around and we have absolutely no idea why, and there's no internal reason in story that tells us why. He just does like some zombie because the plot is there so obviously he should somehow participate in it. He even wanted to see Lord of Hei dudes, but again, there was just no reason for that, he just wanted to because story required him to. There was no mention of potential rewards or anything that would help mc, if anything seeing mysterious strong person is just an huge threat. I would really like to give this better review, but I just can't because story till 150 has been mostly just about boat(mc) being pushed around by waves, and every time boat is about to crash into huge rock, another wave just comes in and pushes the boat to the side. I would like that boat to have some oars, sails and actual person directing it.

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