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2021-12-27 05:25

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this. I read 38 chapters and am looking forward to more. I saw that the author was worried about pacing as people wanted him to be in shows and debut quickly. However I am enjoying the pace and think your writing is great.

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Okay thank you for giving me your opinion, and yes I am in the middle of making things not too rushed neither too slow just the pace, characters need a story not just the mc. Not just a random i dont like you to be the villain. And not just hey I'm a good guy to be good, depth in characters its hard but I'm trying.

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