the story is full of inconsistencies where author cannot stick to his powers plus if mc gets a dojutsu that's more advanced by combining them then rinnegan sharingan and tenseigan then he should have all there abilities on top of whatever else the author through in plus amaterasu is the sun goddess and the tenseigan should have been the moon eye author please go either read some more naruto fanfics to get a understanding of the world and stuff cause this storys to rushed and inconsistent as hell plus the slave thing is dumb not thought out well if you wanted to go through a harem route with the system add a reputation section to the system you could still get the girls and get some character development out of it also the god thing was kinda out there as an idea a spin that I would use is instead of the demon mission in its urgency make him dimension hop after going through the naruto world and you can take your time then I'd probably go to fairytail to get dragon slayer magics of all the elements and then dragonball then some other webnovel so that he builds a strong foundation
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