Review Detail of Fathir_Rezky in What? A Group Chat?

Item: What? A Group Chat?
Rating: 3

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Fathir_RezkyLv11yrFathir_Rezky

I Dropped Reading This Novel, Because I Don't Like The Novel's Storyline with the Theme "Group Chat" and the members have MCs from other anime, actually the story is good but I found in this novel that the MC of this novel is not highlighted, in fact the one that stands out is the MC of RWBY and maybe the next one that stands out is Archer *disclaimer: This is just my own opinion so just ignore it

What? A Group Chat?

Charlottes

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CharlottesAuthorCharlottes

Can't blame ya though xD, but thanks for reading anyway.

1yr

NameIsLifeLv4NameIsLife

You just need to make Jaune an actual MC

Charlottes:Can't blame ya though xD, but thanks for reading anyway.

1yr

CharlottesAuthorCharlottes

I will in my other fanfics!

NameIsLife:You just need to make Jaune an actual MC
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1yr

NameIsLifeLv4NameIsLife

Tbh, I can see this stpry being much more interesting with just a few little tweaks. 1) Shifting the whole story to Jaune's PoV. He is pretty much a shell of a character. You can easily mold him into different things, without going ooc. He has inherent motivation AND a lot of opportunities to grow stronger while attracting women. And, as a matter of personal taste, his "RL" parts won't be as boring as mundane world OC with OC characters. 2) Shifting "Blake" into full "authors avatar" position. Omniscient and omnipotent being who dragged interesting people into his chat group for entertainment purposes ( I.E. Zelretch lol). This would give you more freedom to act if you need, while giving simple explanation of "who/why/when/where/what the heck is happening with this whole chat group business"

Charlottes:I will in my other fanfics!

1yr