Review Detail of _Pochitalover_ in What? A Group Chat?

Translated by Google sensei: All relatively good at first, but then it goes downhill in the Demon Slayer mission. The interaction between any character other than the protagonist or Jaune is good, but the main problem is with these two. Not only do I have to put up with the protagonist being in embarrassing and clichéd situations, but also, thanks to the author's fanboy, I have to put up with Jaune in even more embarrassing and clichéd situations. The author kills only both characters and the worst thing is that they are the ones who have the main role, not to mention that since this story is a semi-self-insertion, the protagonist lives sucking Jaune's p*nis. If you manage to ignore all that sorry spectacle, the story is decent, the author has to stop being such a fanboy and give these two characters more solid personalities.