Review Detail of Jack_Priper in Into the Zombie World

As the author said, there's a lot of grammatical errors. He seems to have a preference for using philippino terms rather than translating them in. The story is mildly interesting. The author wants perfectionists to begone. I'm not a perfectionist; however my reading habits can make me say a few unsavory words here and there even so. For example, I'm not sure whether my boredom was slightly alleviated or if I wasted my time and still wasn't satisfied.