I really like the creativity involved in creating the character, world and background. The English is horrid though and sometimes it pulls me out of the story. The fight scenes are getting better and better. I really like Maximo and the animal development.
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LIKENeil_Ads:hehehe sorry about my english. But don't worry, already have an editor. But due to his other work, maybe he would only start editing on next week's chaps.