Review Detail of Hua_Li_An in Into the Zombie World

Fellow Pinoy here! Anyway, I've only read a few chapters, but here's my review on it. Things to improve: First off, there is an obvious approach to action and since it's a zombie novel, it is a must to have action-filled chapters. However, although the author does try to execute this, it can fall flat. Maybe it's because there's not much the readers know about Nile himself, or what even drives him. If it is simply for survival, then the narratives and descriptive words should be improved on more to elicit the right emotions. Good points: The author knows where the story is supposed to go, and Nile's actions are logical. It's also interesting to know there are "interesting zombies", which might be a turning point for the story. To conclude, it's a good story with an easy-to-read format. It can be a good zombie novel and holds potential.