I can't read this the info dump and the Mc who Is 12 looks like 16 acting as if he's 4 and why now is he learning this where I'd he what's his story? (the beginning) please try and read what you made the and like me if you can't handle more than 2 chapters of info-dumping space it out! concept seemed great though.
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