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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_801910mth
    Replied to Paulo_D_Manoel

    it's a joke. clearly your power of imagination is not high enough.

    On his previous life, he was just a regular High School student. (Think of Hanayama from Baki)
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    Naruto: Illusion Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · Jdj_Nfjb
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_801910mth
    Replied to Primordial_Saiyan

    I don't blame you.

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    Genius of the leaf
    Anime & Comics · The_Hollow
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_801910mth
    Replied to Primordial_Saiyan

    Re read chapter 5. The author says it's a metaphor for when a student learns techniques in the academy. Being able to use it thus unlocking the Chakra.

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    Genius of the leaf
    Anime & Comics · The_Hollow
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80191yr
    Posted

    Do not read Inces pedophila Mc is naruto and author writes s scene with him and his little daughter. I hope some people can see this between all the bot 5 star review spam

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    Hokage Master
    Anime & Comics · Raizeenn
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80191yr
    Replied to Chips_8019

    golden? odd auto correct meant moment

    Finally, he landed a powerful kick that made the golem fall to the ground, and Ray was free.
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    Beast Evolution
    Fantasy · Mhizta_Ray
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80191yr
    Commented

    So first the author wrote fighting without a weapon would be impossible but now it's possible because the author wants it to be so whats the point. The Mc said he was waiting for the golden to grab him saying it was moment he was waiting for and so allows himself to be grabbed and almost killed? Was his plan assisted suicide? he only lives because the golem didn't feel like crushing his skull and instead decided pulling on him...??

    Finally, he landed a powerful kick that made the golem fall to the ground, and Ray was free.
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    Beast Evolution
    Fantasy · Mhizta_Ray
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80191yr
    Commented

    He's a little toddler In a jail cell in a high security prison built for a powerful Mage. watched over by armored guards separated by metal bars. No way he does anything ever. Also kill a guard? He'd be lucky if he's not punted like a football

    [Description: As you are too pussy to do anything, if you manage to kill one guard, you will be rewarded with something that could come in handy when the time is needed]
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    Warlock of War: My Ares System
    Fantasy · equuip
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80191yr
    Replied to Daoistgjs2EE
    Naruto pointed to his bowl and said, "I've tried all the flavors here, and they're all good! But the best, in my opinion, is the Miso Pork Bowl. The flavor of pork and miso mixed to the perfect consistency make the mouth water in anticipation."
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    Reborn in the Narutoverse
    Anime & Comics · Daoist_Over_God
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80191yr
    Posted

    The characters are stereotypical the grammar is awful and hard to read the novel has only 20 chapters so far though so I'm unsure if they will improve. because of how awful the English is it makes some scenes just cringey for example the Mc said to taunt someone "deliver my love to your mother he can't help support her child." Then he responded with I am the only sibling in my family you should check to know what to say. ??? this is just bad. because of how many 5 star reviews this has on top of the power chart and how few chapters this has im almost 100% sure this author has some bots to blow up the novel.

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    Playing Firebending (Legend of Korra SI)
    TV · blazuki
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80191yr
    Posted

    The chapters are incredibly short while it has 49 chapters each chapter could be read in maybe 20 seconds or so Huge turn-off. ............

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    Talent System In Naruto
    Anime & Comics · ravenwings
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80191yr
    Posted

    The novel is just sad to read. Novels like these make me wonder how they end up this high on the rankings. Why do some actually good reads end up not even making it hmm weird.

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    Complete Martial Arts Attributes
    Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Replied to Idczhen

    If you the author bring something up that is important or delve into a character it's your job to provide an ounce of context but you did not you had the mc go off on his little expedition through the city showcasing his stupidity with his fans who seem to be remembering the mc raping a important character that wasnt explained how he isn't locked up isn't explained. In short for example if a mc of another book starts to somehow start flying you don't explain how he did it 4 chapters in the future. if you bring up a major conflict that is important to the setting and the previous owner body you don't have him go fix the problem then explain the problrm. That and the horrible dialogue is what prompted my review if you don't grasp that that why I said your out fo your mind

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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Posted

    This novel is just awful I imagine the other reviews are fake they have to be. The start of the novel is meh is not horrible but all the chapters after is just cringey. Imagine the classic Chinese trope of the young master 3x that plus it's how everyone talks and the mc/author is out of their mind. The mc body old owner did a huge crime. Which wasn't explained why or who or when or anything Just oh this happened. Not even 3 chapters in and there are so many plot holes. Don't read this trust me. common sense is nowhere In this novel.

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    Game Lord's Cultivation System
    Eastern · Idczhen
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Posted

    The grammar and the story so far is passable but the characters in the story are just way too unrealistic For example the hokage gives a kid who hasn't unlocked his chakra a s rank technique because the mc wanted one with reason being and I quote "you want strong Shinobi's right"

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    Genius of the leaf
    Anime & Comics · The_Hollow
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Posted

    The mc is a h-anime protag only read if you like that stuff. The writing quality is above average the characters feel alive like to some degre. this is imo though it is something to read.

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    Cultivator With Modern AI
    Eastern · JosieGan
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Replied to Marcelinho_Ggazeli

    I don't think I said anything about tenten more of just story plot and stuff? so beyond that I said his sound abilities you gave him should be quite impossible realistically which some readers won't like. It is a fan fiction so you can make his sound do whatever you want. I'm just pointing this out for others.

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    I am Dosu Kinuta in the naruto world!
    Anime & Comics · Marcelinho_Ggazeli
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Replied to Marcelinho_Ggazeli

    The in inuzuka clan is not a noble as far as I know there are 4 noble clans which the inuzuka clan is not apart of I can't find anyone who says otherwise other than you. As for rating the clan myself I think it's ok nothing impressive decent tracking and that's about it.

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    I am Dosu Kinuta in the naruto world!
    Anime & Comics · Marcelinho_Ggazeli
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Posted

    Concept was good. System wasn't implemented well felt very strange. He somehow knows things he shouldn't like spoilers, if he fuses sound waves into his leg he should be somehow 3-4 times faster? hardly if not no character development whatsoever so far for the mc. The author doesn't care to share his backstory or write action scenes in the exams unless he feels like it. spoilers! Author thinks that Kiba's clan is a noble clan which isn't true so i doubt the authors knowledge of the story. high potential certainly But ruined it very quickly. The author says his sound waves can do things quite impossible like somehow being able to use his sound abilities to turn all energy into sound? I wonder if the reviews actually read the novel not just fan girling over the idea of it which Again is a Interesting concept. Overall not worth reading unless the author edits his novel and fixes it. To author--if you want suggestions The biggest improvement you could make is to stop skipping over your own story like at very beginning where the mc just exists and just oh guess I'm here now and it goes from there not interesting at all. Though if fixed would definitely have a chance to be a solid fan fic. Sorry for long review just felt like sharing my thoughts.

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    I am Dosu Kinuta in the naruto world!
    Anime & Comics · Marcelinho_Ggazeli
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Commented

    Well played

    [You have already reincarnated 15 years ago, but you got your last life memories just now.]
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    Martial Arts System
    Action · Alekzi
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  • Chips_8019
    Chips_80192yr
    Posted

    The story is not bad however the English is difficult to read. I was forced to correct the paragraphs in my head to read it. The system makes no sense as well and could be easily improved for example adding some info dumps explaining it would be a life saver. as the book is now I advise you not to read it until someone edits the book to make it easier to understand.

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    REINCARNATED IN NARUTO WORLD : WITH SYSTEM
    Anime & Comics · MADARAUCHIHA
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