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Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzLv114yr
2020-07-31 18:03

The author has commendable skills when it comes to descriptions and narration, immersing me in a surreal xianxia experience while reading. If you still don't read it then, it's your loss.

Cultivation Epic: Divine Godly Punisher, Armed With Imposing Systems

koladeizdavid
4.5
400 Chs

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koladeizdavid
koladeizdavidAuthor

Wow. Thank you. 🙏 Thanks for the review. Really appreciate that.

4yr
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Magical
MagicalLv3

Reveal spoiler

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Daoist201736
Daoist201736Lv1

So, as an enthusiastic reader of this work, i wanna support the author by reviewing his work as he had requested for it from us. 😄 Although this work deserves a solid 5 star, I don't want to make the author very happy by giving him that. My reason is because of some flaws which I would explain below. Now, my rating goes thus: Writing quality: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I gave 4 out of 5 stars because of there are few grammatical and spelling errors in the story. With some little edits, these would disappear. However, the errors and mistakes that one would find wouldn't shatter one's submersion into the story. Updating stability: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I gave these 5/ 5 stars because author updates everyday. Also, he could give mass release of 4-5 chapters whenever he's in the mood. XD. Story Development: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟🌟 This deserve a solid 5 star. Why? Because I love how the story is unfolding. It's entertaining and at the same time, unpredictable. Also, it is shrouded in mysteries, making it more enthralling. I am really enjoying the story progression and would defo continue to read until the end. Now, unlike some fantasy-cultivation books that have tons of cliches, making them boring and predictable, this book doesn't have cliches. No arrogant young masters and so on, if you get me. 😁 For the Cultivation aspect of the story: the Cultivation system that this story uses is truly unique. One could cultivate many realm-energies by comprehending them and harmonizing with them, becoming one with them. I like how the author made MC cultivates many energies that bestowed him with the power to manipulate and control fire and heat, ice and frost, wind and storm and many more. But what made me more exhilarated about the story were the energies never before seen in any cultivation book. So as examples, radiantforce energy which gave him the power to control light, strengthforce energy which gave him the power of Strength and Might, phantasmforce energy which gave him the power of Illusion. There are just so many to list. However, I would stop here. XD. And, another thing that excites me about this story is how the MC possesses tons of battle-physiques [all because of some good reasons which I wouldn't mention here]. These physiques allow him to battle cultivators that are higher in rank than him. However, he must slay his opponents or challengers in a minute, or he would become weakened by any of the physiques and get killed. Actually, he becomes weakened by them because the power of the physiques aren't supposed to be available to him yet. They are tremendous for him to handle and utilize. So, whenever he summons any of them, he experiences severe headaches, intense body pains and extreme fatigue. Therefore, he must eliminate his opponents before he blacks out due to the agonizing pain and splitting headache that he would suffer from using the powerful physiques. So all these that I stated was what made me love the story the more. Character design: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I will give this 4/5 stars. My rating for this is because, in the beginning chapters of the story, MC was naive and kinda annoying. Also, he was a wimp. Anyways, this was because he actually hadn't stepped out of his uncle's mansion for long. So, he didn't really relate with other people other than his uncle, the maids and workers in the mansion who he had grown accustomed to. But stepping out of his uncle's mansion to hone himself in battle, he quickly became my favorite. The MC who is smart and intelligent quickly got used to how the Cultivation world works. So as the story progressed, I got to love MC the more because he did things that made me happy. I don't know about other readers and what they may think, but I would speak for myself. This MC is one of the best MCs that I have ever come across. I am currently at chapter 160 and I don't yet have a problem with the MC yet. How cool and amazing is that? Also, don't forget that this is an HAREM novel, but this MC doesn't think with his dick. However, he is an admirer of beauties, but who actually isn't???? So the MC's attributes include: smart, adorable, intelligent, generous, cool, then fierce and fearsome in the way that he fights, ruthless as he has killed a lot of cultivators that tried to harm him, daring and super fucking adventurous as he had struggled against high-rank cultivators for cultivation resources, artifacts and treasures. Can you imagine that? So crazy. Haha. World background: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 This surely deserves a solid 5 star. Author really took his time to describe the world well, and everything in it. Note: when you start reading, you may find author explaining stuffs. But these stuffs aren't random useless stuffs, they are actually useful elements in his story. I guess that's just his way of writing which I feel is Descriptive/ expository writing. However, this won't break your immersion. I promise. 😉 Summary: Story is very enjoyable and exhilarating as there are lot of plot twists and stuffs that would excite and delight you. So, I would suggest that you check it out. You would definitely not be disappointed. And if you are, well... then you are looking for something else that isn't in this story. 😁 Author-San, thanks so much for this work. 👍 Do keep updating. 👌✌️

4yr
GoldenEyed_SkyWolf
GoldenEyed_SkyWolfLv2

I have nothing to say other than it's AMAZING. Is it the Story progression? Cultivation levels? Weapons? Battle descriptions? MC's love life? Romance and Sex scenes? Suspense, Thrills and Mysteries? Basically everything in this novel is great. Although there are minor writing errors here and there, the book is still very much entertaining. Keep up the good work dear author. Don't stop writing. And don't forget to keep safe.

4yr
Chips_8019
Chips_8019Lv3

I can't read this the info dump and the Mc who Is 12 looks like 16 acting as if he's 4 and why now is he learning this where I'd he what's his story? (the beginning) please try and read what you made the and like me if you can't handle more than 2 chapters of info-dumping space it out! concept seemed great though.

4yr
Yrmynoodlescold
YrmynoodlescoldLv11

Hard to find fault with this book in terms of writing quality. The quality is very nice. The chapter lengths are long but the paragraphs are nicely structured so it is easy to follow and keep track. The story and character development is really well done. Although the idea is very simple, the writing makes it a nice read. Really worth reading in my personal opinion...

4yr
Bakkoy
BakkoyLv4

Am I the only one who has never seen the MC avoid spells and only counter them? And causing him to be hit back by the difference in cultivation? She should be fast as her element is wind but she was just throwing energy here and there. Will he learn to fight then? Please answer because I will continue or not depending on the author's answer. What I mean above is about volumes 1 and 2. If I'm wrong then please show me. Because I'm reading this in a bad mood.

4yr
Fordy0
Fordy0Lv10

I wonder, How many chapter are all in this story? because I only ended in chapter 348, because I'm thinking to buy privilege, if it is really worth it? -is it more than 1000 chapters? I really like it alot :) -I hope it will have more chapters to come:))))) -THANK YOU WRITER-

4yr
GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14

first of MC is idiot not only naive also idiot, he says he can't further his cultivation but doesn't use the pills left behind by his father and mother even though trillion of lives are on the line because what pride?? that's shitty so many USELESS info dumps oh so so so many of them

4yr
Zeim_Zeio
Zeim_ZeioLv10

This feels more lIke an essay more than a story lol. The explanations are too long which is not yet needed. All the cultivation level is introduced at the start leaving no excitement for the readers to explore and continue reading on the systems. The author could have tried to introduced the cultivation leVels and the world in a mystifying way when the readers will all be piqued. I must say that the author has good ideas but how he expose the story and narrates It does not give any thrill to the readers or make the readers hooked on the story.

4yr
LionessLover
LionessLoverLv11

All you have to do to understand the utter uselessness and stupidity of this story is to read the Glossary chapter (right after the Prologue), especially the 2nd part to the end. What a waste of braincells.

4yr
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