This feels more lIke an essay more than a story lol. The explanations are too long which is not yet needed. All the cultivation level is introduced at the start leaving no excitement for the readers to explore and continue reading on the systems.
The author could have tried to introduced the cultivation leVels and the world in a mystifying way when the readers will all be piqued.
I must say that the author has good ideas but how he expose the story and narrates It does not give any thrill to the readers or make the readers hooked on the story.
Hi...
It's just 3 chapters at the beginning. And this is because I was a beginning author then. I didn't have much writing experience when I first started.
But if you can patiently go beyond that, you would enjoy the story. I promise.
Thanks for branching by anyways if you have dropped. 👌
Zeim_ZeioLv10
Oh, I see. i liked your idea of the story though, but the way you wrote the first three chapters is pretty bland honestly. I remember you sayIng all the currency and then having the equivalent eXchange for them for hundreD billion or ten billions on which you could very well make scales for it or just use some hyperbole or metaphors to describe Its worth.
I’d continue reading it. ThAnk you.
Kido_TOLv4
Blandness is opness
Zeim_Zeio:Oh, I see. i liked your idea of the story though, but the way you wrote the first three chapters is pretty bland honestly. I remember you sayIng all the currency and then having the equivalent eXchange for them for hundreD billion or ten billions on which you could very well make scales for it or just use some hyperbole or metaphors to describe Its worth.
I’d continue reading it. ThAnk you.
